1/20 DETAIL FEEDBACK?

HEY GUYS

i've had a play with the wall detail, but in doing so have probably created more problems than i have solved, although i think the design intent is clearer. any comments would be of great help!

Cheers,

JACK
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hey Jack!

I think it looks much more dynamic than it did last class! What material is the white space with the triangle (LED lights?) in it? concrete? maybe adding some textures to that space and the earth would help to clarify.

See you tomorrow : ) X

— Madeline
I agree with the form changing, much more interesting, Some of the details are still a little under-expressive I think, you could exaggerate them more in places. I think it will still read as this tiles. Maybe draw it in 3D to understand better. Check on the window details, add more to it, is that a gutter before the window? It's unclear. Overall add another 30% more detail and play more with the overall effect expressed by the details, gaps etc - 
— Ammon Beyerle