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Keep the specific programmes out of the first paragraph, they are the responses to a general need in the community for social services.
These are the best ways that the cathedral has deemed it can respond to the current context.
The 3rd paragraph is very good, everyone should read this
Remove the 4th paragraph - this is the architectural response and should form part of the schematic design, not the brief from the client.
Very very clear brief. Again a good example.
The teaching and community rooms seem a little overdefined, almost as if the client is designing - need to make more general so you have flexibility to develop best practice or innovations.
Remove the butterfly garden and rooftop garden descriptions from the brief and perhaps replace with outdoor rooms? - with an intention to make the space open and connected to nature.
The foyer is expensive?
i still think you should remove the pretty functions like theatre/auditorium and focus on developing strong community services/ social services.
Remove the budget for the rooftop garden, imagine this brief as a step one and the architect will have to make the concessions to include it as her vision.
Increase the services spaces, the laundy, womens centre etc..
getting very close
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— Ammon Beyerle
Thanks for the feedback. I have changed the theatre/ auditorium to a dinning hall and community kitchen and increased the laundry and workshop. I'll keep working on it.
— Heather Mitcheltree