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attached,
i agree with the critics comments thoroughly (pasted below)
the mess of the things that service this sort of programme needs to be brought in and even made a major part of the architectural project.
other than that i think your facade is still not as crafted as we were speaking about last class, it needs to be 10 times more amazing, and keep going on your Ys
consider again the scale on the streetscape etc,
lovely project here, it could be really something, but go bolder again
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Hi Ammon,
i agree with the critics comments thoroughly (pasted below)
the mess of the things that service this sort of programme needs to be brought in and even made a major part of the architectural project.
other than that i think your facade is still not as crafted as we were speaking about last class, it needs to be 10 times more amazing, and keep going on your Ys
consider again the scale on the streetscape etc,
lovely project here, it could be really something, but go bolder again
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Hi Ammon,
Hope your having fun. Please find attached my interim presentation. Some of the comments were:
- Landscape needs work / mediation between indoor & outdoor
- Accept the need for a lot of mechanical ventilation & work it into the scheme above ground
- Is there a hierarchy in the studio space? Eg: master and apprentice
- include more specific workshop areas rather than a collaborative space. Eg fume cupboards, dangerous mechanical areas / noisy tasks, etc.
- access for large mechanical equipment and materials.
I did stress that my main concern will be the detail, however i didn't get any comment (I only had enough time to produce one basic detail for my presentation). And the engineers arrived after my presentation, so there was no feedback from them.
I will work on structure and detail this weekend & email you any progress (I have a couple of other assignments to catch up on today unfortunately)
Looking forward to your comment.
Thanks,
Scott.