Feedback for Jessie

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I definitely agree with the critics, materiality will make or break this project

Take on board all the developed feedback from last week in front if the class, there's still quite a bit nit yet looked at / responded to

Overall, it's looking good but you need to nut out the relationship with the cathedral

You should probably go back to the start in terms of the question of ambience, it has no depth yet.. And for bath wellness centres it is paramount!!

Precedents, mood boards etc etc
Surfaces, textures, colours, shapes