Looks interesting, the seeds of a great subtle project are here.. The green wall is amazing
- contextualise the project much more and at multiple scales
- think through programming, how the centre functions educationally - it needs to be multilayered
- I think the programme could be more ambitious. This might be a significant rethink but I think you could do it simply whilst keeping much of what you have
- there are issues with scale and formality - many of the spaces and shapes need rationalising and to realise their location in the centre of the city, next to a cathedral with potentially your spaces seeing 300k people a year!!!
- need a lot more detail in drawings, they are currently at 1/200 as is the design
- the detail will be great when you do it, you must really study the heritage building in reality - go there again
- contextualise the project much more and at multiple scales
- think through programming, how the centre functions educationally - it needs to be multilayered
- I think the programme could be more ambitious. This might be a significant rethink but I think you could do it simply whilst keeping much of what you have
- there are issues with scale and formality - many of the spaces and shapes need rationalising and to realise their location in the centre of the city, next to a cathedral with potentially your spaces seeing 300k people a year!!!
- need a lot more detail in drawings, they are currently at 1/200 as is the design
- the detail will be great when you do it, you must really study the heritage building in reality - go there again
I like it v much but it needs much much more depth! Keep going forwards only