Feedback for queenie

Still a project with potential but not answering the tough questions:
- sleeping at the cathedral : meaning? homelessness?
- community connection spaces

There are some elements here that with a few steps could be amazing but are yet to be developed.

You should strongly develop the typical floor plans much more.
Facade needs work and detailing - but also a lot of shaping and patterning which corresponds to the context
Your response to the site is lacking other than a solid sense of scale

I think you need a massive input of ambition on this project, ground floor looking good but the rest doesn't realise it is next to a cathedral!!! And THIS one more specifically