Jack, I think the project is finally getting there.
Add a whole lot more detail to the drawings and it will sing.
Work on structure
I think a really developed sense of the difference between a conference centre and theatre would be worthwhile as a masters project. Do research
The auditorium needs a lot of work.
Consider a future conference centre that would not get outdated quickly but be a message of future thinking with maturity. Step back and consider the message you are projecting in the aesthetic.
Good work. More detail
Add a whole lot more detail to the drawings and it will sing.
Work on structure
I think a really developed sense of the difference between a conference centre and theatre would be worthwhile as a masters project. Do research
The auditorium needs a lot of work.
Consider a future conference centre that would not get outdated quickly but be a message of future thinking with maturity. Step back and consider the message you are projecting in the aesthetic.
Good work. More detail