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Ben
I thoroughly agree with your email below. Do each dot point in great detail.

I've made a few comments. I would add that my sense is you need to consider it with all the activity of the day and night, rain and sun, holiday workday and respond with design. It's all a bit too clean and ''A'architectural' at the moment. - obviously because the design isn't very old yet.
It's looking pretty exciting nonetheless.
The only radical change I'd consider is a stronger relationship to the physical characteristics of the interior and exterior of the gothic cathedral.
It is a religious moral site with deep symbology.


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Hi Ammon,

Attached is my pres, and in the following email is the group pres. The group did a fair bit of work would be interested to hear your further comments. 

For my personal proposal:

- Want to heavily get into materiality and structural system. 
- Develop some images of the interior spaces and moods. 
- Deal with planning issues further. 
- Really develop a strong connection between the ground plane and my building. 
- Considering my built proposal is a week and a half old, I think it's not too bad, but I have a long way to go. 

Cheers, 

Ben.