Hi jade,
Brief comments, happy with how you're going on the whole,
And, we spent heaps of time together last Tuesday, which I'm sure you are still working through
Feel free to continue hand drawing
Develop the dome thing, make it work 100% including water, structure, day night light, security, safety, streetscape, maintenance etc etc
Work up Swanston street more.
The interior materiality/form/pattern needs a lot of work. It's looking like a modern box, which I think argues with the ambience of your project. Your project needs to realise it's gothic heart - keep going
:
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And now the ominous question: what's an intimate public space?
Brief comments, happy with how you're going on the whole,
And, we spent heaps of time together last Tuesday, which I'm sure you are still working through
Feel free to continue hand drawing
Develop the dome thing, make it work 100% including water, structure, day night light, security, safety, streetscape, maintenance etc etc
Work up Swanston street more.
The interior materiality/form/pattern needs a lot of work. It's looking like a modern box, which I think argues with the ambience of your project. Your project needs to realise it's gothic heart - keep going
:
;
And now the ominous question: what's an intimate public space?