Hi Ammon,
I presented my interim as A2 trace pin ups, but have editted them into black and white for this email attachment. Apologies if the drawings are grey and splotchy, I'm experimenting on the best way to scan, edit and digitise them but still trying to keep the hand drawn quality.
My feedback from the crits:
- Chop away top half of the plan, take off the rear end of the programs like cafeteria, dining area (under chapter house) so my scheme is a lot stronger with just the key spaces (burrow entry, reflective space, gathering space, meditation rooms)
- Program wise, digging under the cathedral for a 'gathering space' doesnt seem like the most justifiable proposition. Maybe it could be all-faiths/interdenominational meditation rooms instead, making it an underground silent retreat away place
- Ground floor plan significantly under developed (I realised this too, working on it now)
- Need to find a way of explaining my concept with more confidence and clarity.
- Place people where they get the best view from underground
Jade