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Comments: Spelling schloss and principles Like framing and consideration of interruption What about social - cultural goals? It is a cathedral Bit repetitive Market requirements - say target audience? Public? I think your definition has forgotten all the conversations in the studio up to now, do you mean to say amenities? Think much more about the social role of the project as an investment In a brief areas are always approximate and should give indication of how they could shift Don't say courtyard, maybe secluded external room? You could be much dryer with gallery descriptions, your themes are already a design value add Think more ambitiously about technology Ditto on sustainable systems, active and passive Too much repetition, needs some more organising, 
A very good start and interesting But expand on the biennale, isn't it the core thing? A     Bring schematic design proposal on Tuesday
— Ammon Beyerle
Thanks Ammon
— tsnelson